Outcome of the Critique.

Now that I have absorbed and digested the excellent critique I received today (of which I was lucky to have three level 7 students  and two tutors attend ) I will summarise here what I am going to implement over the next few weeks –

  • Create a narrative and draw up storyboards.
  • Record ambient sound: waves at beach, river flow with rocks splashing, feet running, children talking and laughing…
  • Film the children doing the mundane: eating breakfast, bathing, sleeping..
  • Film some more symbolism – lock and keys, filing metaphors for memory and dreams.

In the future when filming I could leave the sound on encase I want to use it? – food for thought. 


About jessshirley1981

Hi there, Im a 33 year old mum of two, a 7 year old daughter and a 5 year old son. I am studying for the BA in Arts & Media part time, I have just finished L6 Studio this semester 2, 2014. My passion is photography, here is a link to my facebook photography page for those of you that are interested https://www.facebook.com/pages/Jessica-Shirley-Photography/414300345298086
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