First trail of editing.

First trail of editing.

Here is a before and after the image on the left is straight out of the camera.

I have had to extend the canvas size to make room for the words. I wanted to have the words partly over Kim, but they get lost in her dark clothing. I have had to lighten the background to make the words stand out more clearly.

The background looks too busy and cluttered, it is also poorly cloned. I will have to keep playing.


About jessshirley1981

Hi there, Im a 33 year old mum of two, a 7 year old daughter and a 5 year old son. I am studying for the BA in Arts & Media part time, I have just finished L6 Studio this semester 2, 2014. My passion is photography, here is a link to my facebook photography page for those of you that are interested
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One Response to First trail of editing.

  1. raggedpoet says:

    Beautiful people Jess… congrats on finding them all!!

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